Wikipedia:Peer review/Corky Romano/archive1

Corky Romano

I don't expect this to become a featured article or anything, but I just want some feedback on how to make it better. I just finished the entire article myself, and I just want some outside opinions on it. Any help is appreciated. Clinevol98 06:59, 6 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

• For starters you might add in the "Infobox_Movie" template, such as is used on many of the movie pages. (For example, Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope.) I like to include some basic film information prior to the spoiler warning, such as the run time, whether it was in color, the sound technology, what type of MPAA rating it received and why, &c. Also there is an "imdb title" template that can be used for linking in the IMDB page. Thanks. :) — RJH 21:29, 6 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I've extensively edited the text for style, but it's still rather clumsy, and too detailed for such a minor movie, in my opinion. I think the plot summary would benefit from reduction to a much smaller synopsis. TheMadBaron 00:36, 8 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

• what's wrong with having a detailed plot summary? who cares how minor the movie was. 68.59.194.244 23:29, 11 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]