User contributions for Septegram
A user with 4,539 edits. Account created on 14 October 2005.
16 May 2024
- 14:5214:52, 16 May 2024 diff hist −34 Steve Belkin →Biography: This is a different "Trans National Communications." The link leads to a company that makes no mention of Belkin and is headquartered in New York rather than Massachusetts. current
27 April 2024
- 06:4406:44, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1 Hamas →Second Intifada: Copyedit image caption from "Intifiada" to "Intifada." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 March 2024
- 09:0409:04, 5 March 2024 diff hist 0 The High Ground (Star Trek: The Next Generation) →Plot: Copyedit to remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. "A short-term solution" would be an appropriate use of a hyphen, but "in the short-term" is not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 January 2024
- 03:3103:31, 23 January 2024 diff hist −44 Killing of Tony Timpa →Legal proceedings: Remove superseded text.
1 January 2024
- 23:3123:31, 1 January 2024 diff hist 0 List of screw drives →Spanner: Copyedit, change a comma between two related sentences that could stand alone into a semicolon. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 December 2023
- 09:2009:20, 9 December 2023 diff hist +1 Assault on Wall Street →Plot: Copyedit: corrected "best-interest" to "best interests." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 November 2023
- 12:1112:11, 29 November 2023 diff hist 0 Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan →Reception: Copyedit: removed superfluous/incorrect dashes. Correct usage would be "gave it a three-and-a-half star review," but not "gave it three-and-a-half stars." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 November 2023
- 02:4902:49, 22 November 2023 diff hist 0 Even Lambs Have Teeth →Plot: Copyedit: to black out is a verb. "Blackout" is a noun. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 November 2023
- 14:1014:10, 9 November 2023 diff hist −18 Cruiser rules →History: Removed superfluous dash from "Laconia incident." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 October 2023
- 09:2709:27, 17 October 2023 diff hist −5 Tor (network) →2018: Rephrase for slight improvement in readability. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:2509:25, 17 October 2023 diff hist +1 Tor (network) →2017: Copyedit; add comma for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 September 2023
- 13:0113:01, 17 September 2023 diff hist +3 Unrotated Projectile Copyedit for slight improvement in grammar. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:5112:51, 17 September 2023 diff hist 0 Prince Eugene of Savoy →Personal life: Copyedit: adding the missing hyphen to "seventy-two." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 July 2023
- 14:3314:33, 25 July 2023 diff hist −28 The Juniper Tree (fairy tale) →Synopsis: Remove unnecessary exposition. This information is provided a sentence or two previously. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 April 2023
- 15:4215:42, 14 April 2023 diff hist +95 Jet fighter generations →Sixth generation (2020s): Add relevant reference to semi-autonomous drone "wingmen." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 February 2023
- 12:4712:47, 5 February 2023 diff hist +6 Elles (film) →Production: Rephrase for slightly more encyclopedic tone Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 December 2022
- 03:5103:51, 5 December 2022 diff hist 0 The Tin Man (novel) Copyedit incorrect capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 October 2022
- 17:0017:00, 19 October 2022 diff hist +1 Suits (American TV series) →Spin-off: Copyedit for tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 September 2022
- 13:2513:25, 15 September 2022 diff hist 0 Playgirl →History: The W3C convention is for URLs to be all lowercase. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 July 2022
- 18:0418:04, 29 July 2022 diff hist −10 m Rolling Thunder (video game) NPOV
9 June 2022
- 13:5313:53, 9 June 2022 diff hist +115 Henry Selby Hele-Shaw Clarification needed
- 13:4713:47, 9 June 2022 diff hist +121 Hele-Shaw clutch →Description: Citation absolutely needed. In the unlikely event this is true, Professor Hele-Shaw's name still needs to be spelled correctly. I found no case where the name has an accented e ("é").
- 13:4313:43, 9 June 2022 diff hist +5 Hele-Shaw clutch →Description: Tidying up grammar, slight change for NPOV
- 13:3213:32, 9 June 2022 diff hist −21 m James Kirk diploma mills →History: Remove superfluous repetitions of detail. Minor punctuation/grammar change.
7 June 2022
- 15:4615:46, 7 June 2022 diff hist −21 Caprera →History: Change phrasing slightly for more NPOV tone. Add capitalization to book title.
1 June 2022
- 17:5617:56, 1 June 2022 diff hist 0 m Computer cooling →Heat-sinks: Tidying up punctuation
18 May 2022
- 19:3919:39, 18 May 2022 diff hist +411 Talk:New Age →Invisible Text: new section Tag: Reverted
17 May 2022
- 15:4815:48, 17 May 2022 diff hist −3 New Age Changing hidden text to section headings. Tag: Reverted
- 15:4315:43, 17 May 2022 diff hist +30 New Age Undid revision 1088243629 by Editor2020 (talk) These seem to be mis-coded section headings. I will mark them as such. Tag: Undo
13 May 2022
- 13:4913:49, 13 May 2022 diff hist −2 Jarret Brachman →Education and career: Corrected misspelling of Dr. Brachman's name
1 May 2022
- 16:1416:14, 1 May 2022 diff hist −4 m Steven Mnuchin →Comments on Lego Batman movie: Copyedit grammar. Change subsequent sentence to be slightly tighter.
29 April 2022
- 19:1719:17, 29 April 2022 diff hist +38 m Metal foam →Hybrid foam: Add relevant wikilink
21 April 2022
- 10:2510:25, 21 April 2022 diff hist 0 Lockheed Martin F-35 Lightning II Copyedit: remove superfluous / incorrect hyphen. "A shot-down aircraft" is correct; "they shot-down the enemy" is not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 March 2022
- 14:0014:00, 31 March 2022 diff hist +273 N User talk:2409:4041:D9C:6199:0:0:404B:480F ←Created page with 'Hi; you posted something on my page, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. ~~~~' current
30 March 2022
- 14:2114:21, 30 March 2022 diff hist +665 Talk:Public adjuster →Copyvio: new section
- 14:1614:16, 30 March 2022 diff hist −115 Public adjuster Add relevant wikilink. Remove explanatory text. Rework some of the text for more neutral tone. Frankly, this smells of copyvio, but I don't have time to work on that now.
28 March 2022
- 15:3115:31, 28 March 2022 diff hist −8 m Scram →Mechanisms: Only one link per subject is required.
- 14:2714:27, 28 March 2022 diff hist +210 User:Septegram/notes →To Do: Updating notes current
25 March 2022
- 13:0213:02, 25 March 2022 diff hist −3 Lady Sheba Remove superfluous/incorrect apostrophe (eyeroll). Change "intended" to "tended;" the material wasn't something that all other Wiccans wanted to keep secret, just most of them.
24 March 2022
- 15:2815:28, 24 March 2022 diff hist +2 m Pelham, Massachusetts →Education: Copyedit change "1" to "one" MOS
- 15:2615:26, 24 March 2022 diff hist +48 User:Septegram/notes →To Do
18 March 2022
- 14:5814:58, 18 March 2022 diff hist −33 Minneapolis, North Carolina Remove superfluous citation request. It's intuitively obvious that a town of under 500 people is barely notable and definitely less famous than the largest city in Minnesota. Added population data from city-data.com/township/Minneapolis-Avery-NC.html, although I can't include it as a citation; Wikipedia seems to think it's a spam site.
17 March 2022
- 16:4216:42, 17 March 2022 diff hist −13 m Wicca Removing superfluous "BTW"s. Once the abbreviation is defined, it is not necessary to keep doing so.
- 16:4016:40, 17 March 2022 diff hist −4 m Wicca "BTW" links to a disambiguation page, and does not need a link because the full phrase is linked in the words immediately preceding the abbreviation.
9 March 2022
- 14:3914:39, 9 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Guntō →History: Add relevant wikilink
- 14:2914:29, 9 March 2022 diff hist −10 Puyi →Puppet ruler of Manchukuo (1932–1945): "Since then" carries the implication of something continuing to the present. This better describes the situation. Remove unnecessary redirect for Kenpeitai.
2 March 2022
- 18:3218:32, 2 March 2022 diff hist +11 Modern paganism →Late 20th century: Add relevant wikilink. Remove superfluous "the." Remove reference to Paganism as a religion, since it is an "umbrella" term covering any number of religions.
23 February 2022
- 12:0212:02, 23 February 2022 diff hist +133 Weather Underground Add relevant citation. I'm using an unfamiliar tool, so I apologize if I didn't format this as well as I might have normally. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 February 2022
- 16:2316:23, 22 February 2022 diff hist +395 Talk:New Forest coven Request clarification
- 16:0116:01, 22 February 2022 diff hist −7 Ossian Slightly tighten phrasing