User contributions for Jcejhay
A user with 3,549 edits. Account created on 28 April 2013.
26 May 2024
- 23:1323:13, 26 May 2024 diff hist −254 Turn! Turn! Turn! (album) →Music: Removed content that strayed into gratuitous off-tone commentary. current
- 18:0718:07, 26 May 2024 diff hist −6 Annie's Homegrown →top: I think "rabbit" is better than "bunny rabbit" as far as encyclopedia tone is concerned. current
24 May 2024
- 20:1320:13, 24 May 2024 diff hist +11 Success Hasn't Spoiled Me Yet Actually, the CN template up top was overkill. It's mainly this one passage that cries out for a footnote. current
- 20:0620:06, 24 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Success Hasn't Spoiled Me Yet →top: Formatting.
- 20:0220:02, 24 May 2024 diff hist −173 Success Hasn't Spoiled Me Yet →top: Removed speculative, tenuous, and discursive assertions re. WSSRH.
- 20:0120:01, 24 May 2024 diff hist +26 Success Hasn't Spoiled Me Yet →top: CN template.
- 11:5211:52, 24 May 2024 diff hist −51 Suzanna Leigh Parent-daughter relationship did not belong under "career." Daughter is apparently not notable enough to have an article, so since there's no "family" section I removed her altogether. current
- 11:4911:49, 24 May 2024 diff hist −1 Suzanna Leigh →Career: Removed incorrect comma.
- 11:4911:49, 24 May 2024 diff hist −5 Suzanna Leigh →Career: Style, formatting, tone.
23 May 2024
- 17:2517:25, 23 May 2024 diff hist −16 Lady Astor (disambiguation) →Baroness Astor of Hever: I'm pretty sure those "the's" were errors, not formally correct styling. Apologies if I'm mistaken. current
- 16:5316:53, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Elizabeth Bibesco →top: Supplied missing comma. current
- 15:1215:12, 23 May 2024 diff hist +8 Mabel Normand →Roscoe "Fatty" Arbuckle trials: Replaced non-neutral "best" with "most notable."
22 May 2024
- 16:0816:08, 22 May 2024 diff hist −12 Francine York →Career: Moved "showgirl" wikilink to term's first appearance and eliminated unnecessary second use of this problematic term. More appropriate section heading. Eliminated off-tone use of first name. current
- 14:3714:37, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 Jo Wood Moved "charity" section so that the two entrepreneurial sections are sequential. current
- 14:3514:35, 22 May 2024 diff hist −79 Jo Wood Put all TV together and all writing together; style.
- 14:1614:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist −29 Jo Wood Put two memoirs together.
- 14:1114:11, 22 May 2024 diff hist −23 m Jo Wood →Alien Nation podcast: Italics in header as well (but lowercase for "podcast"). "Podcast Radio" is not a first name / last name, so took that out of reference.
- 14:0914:09, 22 May 2024 diff hist +19 Jo Wood →Alien Nation Podcast: "Close encounters" should not be presented as fact. Also gave the phrase a wikilink and the podcast title italics.
- 14:0714:07, 22 May 2024 diff hist −216 Jo Wood →Mrs. Paisley's Lashings: Section had too much detail; read like PR. (Also, the assertion that "all" food was grown in her garden was contradicted by "locally sourced where possible.")
- 14:0414:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Jo Wood →Jo Wood Organics: No italics for brand name.
- 14:0414:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −6 m Jo Wood →Family: Full name for someone with dedicated article.
- 14:0314:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Jo Wood →Early life: Full name for someone with dedicated article.
- 14:0214:02, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 Jo Wood →Early life: "Lady" belongs in the wikilinked text, otherwise it reads as off-tone language.
- 14:0014:00, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Jo Wood →top: No reason to have brand name in italics.
21 May 2024
- 13:1613:16, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Rose Macaulay →top: Full stop better than semicolon here: the two statements are not closely related.
18 May 2024
- 11:4611:46, 18 May 2024 diff hist +9 Lobster Thermidor →History: "Possibly" for an alternative that is only one of three, not the only alternative to the first. current
- 11:4411:44, 18 May 2024 diff hist +27 Lobster Thermidor →History: Subsidiary elements hingeing on something that is merely one theory of several must not be presented as established facts: they are merely components of that theory.
16 May 2024
- 23:1523:15, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2 Masculin Féminin →top: Replaced "girl" with "singer." current
- 23:1423:14, 16 May 2024 diff hist −186 Chantal Goya →top: Revised to get rid of inappropriate "girl." Wikilink for "girl group," the genre. Removed subjective "catchy" and "talented." Removed OR assessment of Marie-Rose character. current
15 May 2024
- 22:1922:19, 15 May 2024 diff hist +431 User talk:Sm5574 →More of the Monkees photo: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 21:3221:32, 15 May 2024 diff hist +523 User talk:Sm5574 →More of the Monkees photo: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:3817:38, 15 May 2024 diff hist −32 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Revisions now warrant removing "advertisement" template. (But should this article exist at all?)
- 17:3717:37, 15 May 2024 diff hist −216 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Removed orphaned reference.
- 17:3617:36, 15 May 2024 diff hist −171 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Removed "Awards" section, which contained one trivial award and nothing else relevant to the subhead. Moved non-award info up and removed confusing reference to a previously unmentioned location.
- 17:3217:32, 15 May 2024 diff hist −2 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Revised awkward and misleading "less than twenty years" (20 years is a long time!) and removed hypey "proficiency." Revised "is" to "was."
- 17:2617:26, 15 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Grammar.
- 16:4516:45, 15 May 2024 diff hist −46 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: OK, "St. Louisians" does seem like an error; but that whole sentence reflected the promotional tone, so I've pared it down and removed the issue.
- 16:4216:42, 15 May 2024 diff hist +5 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Undid revision 1223983137 by Notty520 (talk) Most of those good-faith changes introduced rather than corrected errors. (But I will look into "St. Louisians" vs. "St. Louisans.") Note that "Wisconsium" is to be taken as intentional wordplay on the part of the sloganeer. Tag: Undo
- 16:2916:29, 15 May 2024 diff hist −713 The Monkees →Conflict with Kirshner: Wikipedia is not a place to gratuitously signal-boost debunked rumors.
- 16:2516:25, 15 May 2024 diff hist −41 The Monkees →Independence: Removed subjective term "amateurish"; replaced "cover art" with "cover photo," which seems to be what was at issue. Rewrote description to avoid word "composite," which seemed possibly not be the accurate term.
- 16:2016:20, 15 May 2024 diff hist +4 m The Monkees →Developing the music for their debut album: Wikilink for first mention of this album.
14 May 2024
- 21:3921:39, 14 May 2024 diff hist +31 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Reads like corporate PR.
13 May 2024
- 19:1019:10, 13 May 2024 diff hist −13 Ring Lardner →Legacy: Removed peculiar appearance of subjective term "sufficiently." current
- 12:1212:12, 13 May 2024 diff hist −271 Bob Burns III →Beast Wishes: Removed off-tone testimonial language and excessive detail. current
- 12:0812:08, 13 May 2024 diff hist +2 Bob Burns III Correction of my previous edit (different AIP).
- 12:0712:07, 13 May 2024 diff hist +30 m Bob Burns III Fixed undefined initialism (and added wikilink).
- 12:0112:01, 13 May 2024 diff hist +19 Bob Burns III Moved Blaisdell content to its own section, as it did not belong under "Bob's Basement." Revised unsourced "best friends" language.
- 11:5811:58, 13 May 2024 diff hist −52 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: No need to mention secondary product with same Burns content.
- 11:5711:57, 13 May 2024 diff hist +2 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: Style, formatting.
- 11:5511:55, 13 May 2024 diff hist −368 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: Removed unsourced hearsay about living subject.