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20 April 2021
- 05:0305:03, 20 April 2021 diff hist −27 False etymology Split the first sentence to avoid unnecessary parenthesis
- 04:5804:58, 20 April 2021 diff hist +1 Jonas Castrén whoops pipe Tag: Reverted
- 04:5704:57, 20 April 2021 diff hist +12 Jonas Castrén change how range of years are expressed Tag: Reverted
19 April 2021
- 13:2313:23, 19 April 2021 diff hist +28 Jonas Castrén →Political life: Right name, wrong person Tag: Reverted
- 13:2113:21, 19 April 2021 diff hist 0 Talk:Jonas Castrén Actually was the version after what I said
- 13:1913:19, 19 April 2021 diff hist 0 Talk:Jonas Castrén woops fr (French) not gr (non-existent)
- 13:1813:18, 19 April 2021 diff hist +86 Talk:Jonas Castrén Add {{translated page}} for attribution
- 13:1513:15, 19 April 2021 diff hist −1 Jonas Castrén →Political life: Fennoman typo Tag: Reverted
- 13:1313:13, 19 April 2021 diff hist +3,244 Jonas Castrén Added text translated from FR:WP. infobox and references Tag: Reverted
- 11:5911:59, 19 April 2021 diff hist +156 Jonas Castrén Update ref (was dead link) Tag: Reverted
- 09:4809:48, 19 April 2021 diff hist +8 Ribena →Post-war: +January,
- 09:4809:48, 19 April 2021 diff hist −16 Ribena →Post-war: rm repeat "In January 2007"
- 05:1305:13, 19 April 2021 diff hist +6 Burial →Orientation: No need to link Qibla twice. If the face is turned to the right (assuming a perfect right angle) it falls along the Qibla, it doesn't face it
- 05:0105:01, 19 April 2021 diff hist −138 Burial →Live burial: An avalanche is a natural disaster and can just go in the list. Fix MOS:OVERLINK for dead and accident, presumably by now people know what death means. WP:LQ for story title, and we can assume that the telephone works and that sensors have telemetry
- 04:5504:55, 19 April 2021 diff hist −46 Burial →Live burial: "Live burial sometimes occurs. in which individuals...." -> "Sometimes people are buried alive."
- 04:5304:53, 19 April 2021 diff hist −78 Burial "in order to" -> "to"
- 04:4604:46, 19 April 2021 diff hist −3 Burial "humans... which bury" should be "who bury", but can avoid whether non-human animals can be "who" by writing "humans... to bury"
- 04:4304:43, 19 April 2021 diff hist −13 Burial "may include... and ohers":don't need "and others" as "include" implies it is not an exhaustive list. Don't need "may", the alternatives ''do'' include these (whether culturally acceptable or not)
- 04:3804:38, 19 April 2021 diff hist −22 Burial "dead person or non-human animal" -> "dead body". First, there is no point distinguishing between humans/people (using different words) and non-human animals only to then combine them. Second, later in the article is section "Burial of animals" so writing "non-human animal" is overly pedantic.
- 04:2804:28, 19 April 2021 diff hist −1 Édouard Baer rm excess vertical whitespace introduced by my previous edit
- 04:2804:28, 19 April 2021 diff hist −17 Édouard Baer →Personal life: This section is not about his personal life (family, home life etc) - it's about his professional life. This can just go in the lede.
- 04:1104:11, 19 April 2021 diff hist −16 Thomson Local "and many others and many others"
- 03:5003:50, 19 April 2021 diff hist −8 Thomson Local "sold off" .> "sold"
- 03:4603:46, 19 April 2021 diff hist 0 Yellow pages →Internet yellow pages: relevancy -> relevance. No need to change a simple adjective into a gerund
- 03:4303:43, 19 April 2021 diff hist −3 Yellow pages →Logo: "Upon graduation" -> "after graduating", In English there is no noun that cannot be verbed.
- 03:4003:40, 19 April 2021 diff hist −388 Yellow pages →History: rm what business owners "should" or should not do per WP:NOTHOWTO
- 03:3303:33, 19 April 2021 diff hist −10 Yellow pages "75 different countries" - as opposed to 75 identical countries?
- 03:3103:31, 19 April 2021 diff hist −28 Yellow pages →History: "yellowpages,xx" is not an Internet address (IP address), it's a domain name. "independent from each other", don't need "from each other"
- 03:2303:23, 19 April 2021 diff hist −2 Yellow pages "Yellow pages" are directories (as in hatnote), not "is any telephone directory".You could have "A Yellow pages is", but not "Yellow pages is". It's not number agreement but that "Yellow pages" is using the whole to mean the part
18 April 2021
- 18:0518:05, 18 April 2021 diff hist −363 Entertainment industry during World War II first sentence, it didn't "help aid support the cause of war". Assume the cause of war was Hitler: are we really saying that the Allied entertainment industry was their to help Hitler? Condense lede to reduce wordiness.
- 17:4917:49, 18 April 2021 diff hist −72 Entertainment industry during World War II This needs a thorough copy edit, but for a start RM "Interestingly" and "in fact" as MOS:OP-ED
- 17:3617:36, 18 April 2021 diff hist −523 User talk:62.165.198.149 ←Blanked the page Tags: Blanking Manual revert
- 14:3014:30, 18 April 2021 diff hist +35 Wikipedia:AutoWikiBrowser/Tasks →Japanese district statistics: Change section title
- 14:2914:29, 18 April 2021 diff hist +1,109 Wikipedia:AutoWikiBrowser/Tasks →Japanese district statistics: new section
- 14:0814:08, 18 April 2021 diff hist +8 Kaifu District, Tokushima Use {{convert}} for population density and area; don't use "²" character (use superscript markup)
- 14:0714:07, 18 April 2021 diff hist +8 Itano District, Tokushima Use {{convert}} for population density and area; don't use "²" character (use superscript markup)
- 14:0614:06, 18 April 2021 diff hist +8 Myōzai District, Tokushima Use {{convert}} for population density and area; don't use "²" character (use superscript markup) current
- 14:0314:03, 18 April 2021 diff hist +17 Naka District, Tokushima Use {{convert}} for population density and area; don't use "²" character (use superscript markup) current
- 13:5413:54, 18 April 2021 diff hist −550 User talk:62.165.198.149 rm Tag: Blanking
- 12:1712:17, 18 April 2021 diff hist −23 Motorway service area →History: "including but not limited to" -> "among others'", and move postpositive instead of as parenthesis
- 12:1612:16, 18 April 2021 diff hist +1 Motorway service area →History: with facilities with the M1 .> when the M1 itself opened. 15th August -> 15 August
- 12:1012:10, 18 April 2021 diff hist +11 Station →Infrastructure: research -> scientific research
- 12:0812:08, 18 April 2021 diff hist +17 Station →See also: Go via "(disambiguation)" R
- 12:0612:06, 18 April 2021 diff hist +213 User talk:62.165.198.149 →Service station: thanks, purely my cock-up
- 11:5411:54, 18 April 2021 diff hist +568 Wikipedia:Requested moves/Technical requests →Technical requests: + missing disambiguation page Tag: Reverted
- 11:4611:46, 18 April 2021 diff hist −18 Station →See also: fix my typp
- 11:4511:45, 18 April 2021 diff hist +53 Station →See also: add Service Station (disambiguation), was in infrastructure section. Actually infrastructure and trasnsport sectrions rather overlap
- 11:4311:43, 18 April 2021 diff hist −201 Station →Infrastructure: Remove WP:PTMs. ("Gas station", "service station"), these are not called "stations" on their own.
- 11:3511:35, 18 April 2021 diff hist −4 Station →Infrastructure: Filling station: change "gasoline/petrol" to "liquid fuel" as can also get diesel, LPG etc and no need for WP:ENGVAR
17 April 2021
- 04:1904:19, 17 April 2021 diff hist +386 Talk:Honno (publisher) No edit summary