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3 June 2024
- 05:3405:34, 3 June 2024 diff hist −16 Sultans of Swing →Recording: rmv peacockish "influential" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 June 2024
- 05:2005:20, 1 June 2024 diff hist −9 Navy bean rmv editorial "even" per MOS:OPED; rmv obstructive link pipe from bean pies current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 May 2024
- 18:3818:38, 31 May 2024 diff hist +1 Handelsbanken update verb tense current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:3107:31, 31 May 2024 diff hist +23 Apocalypse Now →Alternative and varied endings: "current" is meaningless, should be replaced with the year of the referenced Blu-ray release, per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:2407:24, 31 May 2024 diff hist +23 Apocalypse Now →Theatrical release: "now" is meaningless, should be replaced by a specific reference date Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 May 2024
- 08:0408:04, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0 Angus Young rmv errant hyphen between "all" and "time", which here is a noun phrase, not a modifier Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:3507:35, 30 May 2024 diff hist +1 John Fogerty →Personal life: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 May 2024
- 17:0117:01, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1 Walloon alphabet typo current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2806:28, 29 May 2024 diff hist −36 Marilyn vos Savant →Fermat's Last Theorem: rmv instructional and presumptuous "it is pertinent to note that" per MOS:NOTE; rmv editorial "indeed" per MOS:OPED
- 02:4702:47, 29 May 2024 diff hist −7 Richard Dimbleby →Controversy and comedy: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 May 2024
- 23:5923:59, 27 May 2024 diff hist +14 Bob Newhart →Early life and education: rmv unjustified italics and unnecessarily distracting abbreviation from name of oldest sister's religious order Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:4823:48, 27 May 2024 diff hist −8 Bob Newhart correct editorial puffery "was honored with" to neutral "received" per MOS:PEA, MOS:OPED, etc Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:1613:16, 27 May 2024 diff hist −4 YouTube poop rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per MOS:ANDOR Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 May 2024
- 08:0808:08, 26 May 2024 diff hist −29 Holly Springs rmv "Holly Springs, Arkansas": a dab page is for disambiguating existing WP articles, not for suggesting articles to be created current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 May 2024
- 03:4903:49, 25 May 2024 diff hist −30 Norman Bel Geddes rmv instructional and presumptuous "Notably" per MOS:NOTE; rmv peacockish "blockbuster" and "landmark" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:3901:39, 25 May 2024 diff hist +62 Pall Mall (cigarette) What does "adopted" before the third pronunciation mean? current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 May 2024
- 18:1118:11, 23 May 2024 diff hist +6 Absorption refrigerator →History: ce current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4715:47, 23 May 2024 diff hist +23 Dentin hypersensitivity →Home treatment: "in recent years" is uselessly ambiguous, per MOS:RELTIME current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4015:40, 23 May 2024 diff hist 0 Dentin hypersensitivity correct "most" to "more" when comparing only two objects Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3315:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +23 Potassium nitrate →Pharmacology: "Recently" is uselessly ambiguous, per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 May 2024
- 05:0305:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist −165 Quarter Pounder →Product description: rmv questionable, unsourced statement about mustardless QPs in NYC current
- 01:0301:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist +27 Chia →Plants: add that Salvia hispanica is what's used in Chia Pet products current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 May 2024
- 18:4518:45, 19 May 2024 diff hist +677 Talk:Quarter Pounder →Quarter Pounder vs Quarter Pounder With Cheese: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
18 May 2024
- 03:4703:47, 18 May 2024 diff hist −4 FODMAP rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per MOS:ANDOR current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 May 2024
- 16:5316:53, 17 May 2024 diff hist −1 Bleisure travel correct ambiguous "this year" to "that year" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 May 2024
- 22:5322:53, 16 May 2024 diff hist +4 That's All (1952 song) link bumper music current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:5022:50, 16 May 2024 diff hist +29 It Must Be Him (song) add English lyricist to intro current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3908:39, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2 Mack David →Life and career: add dash to avoid suggesting that he received eight nominations for "Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Boo" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:2207:22, 16 May 2024 diff hist −31 Roundhouse →United States: only one active Wikilink per dab page entry current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:2802:28, 16 May 2024 diff hist +185 Good Humor →History: this section is far too colloquial, reads like a newspaper feature or personal reminiscence—should be rewritten as an encyclopedia article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:1902:19, 16 May 2024 diff hist +9 Good Humor →1920s: clarify that "the first set" refers to bells Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0602:06, 16 May 2024 diff hist −19 Good Humor correct "with" to more idiomatic "by" following "started"; rmv incongruous link pipe Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 May 2024
- 19:5919:59, 15 May 2024 diff hist +4 Area code 917 link grandfathering Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:4604:46, 15 May 2024 diff hist −25 Petra rmv peacockish "famously" and "famous" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1501:15, 15 May 2024 diff hist −10 The Cadfael Chronicles →Cadfael novels: rmv instructional and presumptuous "Note that" per MOS:NOTE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0801:08, 15 May 2024 diff hist −2 The Cadfael Chronicles rmv unjustified and distracting quotation marks from pen name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 May 2024
- 19:2919:29, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 Shrewsbury →Saxon: add missing "the"; correct biased "claimed" to neutral "said" per MOS:SAY Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:2619:26, 14 May 2024 diff hist −2 Shrewsbury →Roman and Post-Roman: rmv commas from restrictive appositive: John Wacher is not the only historian Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5418:54, 14 May 2024 diff hist −2 1,1,1,2-Tetrafluoroethane →History and environmental impacts: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4216:42, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 White chocolate →Regulations: correct "or" to "and" in subset list Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3716:37, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 White chocolate →Modern version: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 May 2024
- 20:3520:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist −10 Ice cream cone →20th century: prune verbose and redundant "would later start [...] a few years later" to "started [...] a few years later" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 May 2024
- 05:2605:26, 8 May 2024 diff hist +33 Konstantin Kisin italicize and correct link to Question Time Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 May 2024
- 19:3619:36, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0 Google Pixel correct "similar as" to "similar to" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 11:3111:31, 7 May 2024 diff hist −7 Aaron Montgomery Ward →Public life: the fight for Grant Park: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:1609:16, 7 May 2024 diff hist −6 Dare (band) →Lineup reshuffle: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:5608:56, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0 Audi A8 correct "both ... or ..." to "either ... or ..."; rmv incongruous mid-clause em dash Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 May 2024
- 13:0113:01, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 Swiss Steam Laundry Building correct "located at Baltimore" to "located in Baltimore" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:5205:52, 6 May 2024 diff hist +5 Semi-trailer truck →Europe: clarify that "COE" abbreviates "cab over engine" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2504:25, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 V8 engine →Motorsport: correct "the 2014–present seasons" to "the 2014 and later seasons" per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit